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First of all, I simply loved the video where it was the final showdown of the band’s last two members: Pete and Patrick, and the fact its me favorite song from their album. Although, I wish there was some scenes that could enhance the story a bit more:

  • There would be some scenes that Patrick was fighting the demon/Courtney’s control. You can see his eye color shifting colors to when he was himself transitioning to his demon self.
  • If there were scenes of Patrick turned back to normal, he could help Pete aid his escape
  • There are some lines in “Miss Missing You” that could dictate which lines can go for normal! Patrick and demon! Patrick can sing:
  1. [NORMAL] “Don’t panic
    No not yet
    I know I’m the one you want to forget
    Cue all the love to leave my heart
    It’s time for me to fall apart
    Now you’re gone
    But I’ll be okay
    Your hot whiskey eyes
    Have fanned the flames
    Maybe I’ll burn a little brighter tonight
    Let the fire breathe me back to life”
  2. [DEMON] "Making eyes at this husk around my heart
    I see through you when we’re sitting in the dark
    So give me your filth
    Make it rough
    Let me let me trash your love”
  3. [NORMAL] "Baby, you were my picket fence
    I miss missing you now and then
    Chlorine kissed summer skin
    I miss missing you now and then”
  4. [DEMON] "Sometimes before it gets better
    The darkness gets bigger
    The person that you’d take a bullet for is behind the trigger
    We’re fading fast
    I miss missing you now and then”
  • Pete would be confused to either help or fight Patrick while he’s fighting with himself.
  • Lastly, I wished Patrick gave Pete choices around the end of the video, knowing it will end badly for either of them. Either saying. “Kill me and do what we were supposed to do from the very beginning: save rock and roll” or “Let evil win and rock and roll is gone forever.” It’s more of a “kill me” or “you die” situation. This could show some sort of sympathy between the two asides from just killing each other brutally.

Either way, we all knew that the cult will get the suitcase regardless if either is alive. Most likely, if Pete dies, they will probably kill Patrick since they got him to what was needed.

That’s my rant about this video. I hope this doesn’t change anyone’s opinion bye!!!

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19. ART STUDENT. DRAWS. READ BOOKS. PHOTOSHOP. ILLUSTRATE. EDIT. LISTENING TO MUSIC. FOB-ELIEVER. CURRENTLY WORKING ON ORIGINAL STORIES/DRAWINGS FOR THREE YEARS AND HOPES TO POST THEM BUT CANNOT DUE TO PROCRASTINATION AND LAZYASS-NESS.


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